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He deceived me, just like everyone else, asking me
Ever so patiently to open up to him and share
All my haunting thoughts, those that keep me awake.
Racking sobs erupting from my trembling lips,
Tossing and turning all night, so I do as he asks,
Bearing my soul to him, letting him see my feelings,
Revealing parts of me no one else knew,
Extracting painful memories and entrusting secrets
All the while, he leads me on.  I really should have
Known, should have known he would betray me.
This has the same sort of setup as my other poetry, with the word down the left side being heartbreak.
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Libs01 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like this. So. Damn. Much. :'( 
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ancientfire33 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student Writer
Oh, I am going through this right now :'( And I faced him and everything but he still leads me on, just strumming on my heartstrings...
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TheSaylex Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hey, my girlfriend just broke up with me and blamed it all on me.
she says i did just that, lead her on and manipulate her, but i did nothing wrong...
she broke up with me for the fun of it, planned a double date before breaking up as well...

we we're meant to have a proper longlasting relationship...

what went wrong?
but not a lot of guys lea you on and betray you...
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deathbymortgage Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
Oh, do I know this feeling - just got hurt by the same guy twice, and the second time I KNEW he was going to hurt me, but I still kept going like an idiot.
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NynyWeenie Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Still so deep.
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Savaliste Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
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BrittanyChayanne Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
I think it's called acrylic poetry when you have the words like that.. Lol not sure. This is really good :)
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LucidScream Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011
So True. This really resonated with me.
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CMDay Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011
This really effects me now because it's happening. Drew a lot of emotion. good work.
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lilred2012 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011
it is deep and true, it speaks the truth no one wants to hear
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